In my on going quest to get my book Architect read by as many people as possible. I have received some feed back that has shown me the error of my ways in regards to comma usage. In response to this I have undertaken a close edit, which I believe has corrected these issues. If you have purchased Architect, I suggest you delete it from your library, then reload it. You will then have a completely re-edited copy. Thanks to all those that have already bought Architect and to those who haven't, give it a go!!! http://www.amazon.co.uk/Architect-Steven-Stennett-ebook/dp/B004JHYMJK