I really enjoyed this and was super bummed when it was over so soon!! I wanted more, I tell you, MORE!! Now, I have to wait for the next instalment!!
It was full of twists and turns, & was never the typical sci-fi story which is why I think I enjoyed it so much.
That said, the book did suffer from some editing issues. There were several times when the wrong characters' names were used in a scene.
( This has now been corrected. 15.03.2014)
It was obvious that it was simply an oops and we were still following said character, but something that could be confusing maybe to a younger reader? Also, there were a few times where punctuation was missing so it wasn't clear if we were still following dialogue or if this was narration. ( Corrected 15.03.2014)
I won't get into the nitty gritty but generally speaking, with a great editor & some more fleshing out of the final scene, as I wanted more :D , this would very likely have earned at the very least another half star or more from me!! I can't wait to read more in this series!!
http://www.amazon.com/Architect-Steven-Stennett-ebook/dp/B004JHYMJK
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